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Aries
Number of posts : 10 Registration date : 2009-06-20
| Subject: Nakataka clan Sun Jun 21, 2009 12:30 am | |
| Name: Nakataka Clan Origin: - Spoiler:
Before the world of ninja and ninja techniques, the people that would become the Nakataka were persecuted against. Hated for their corruptive touch and inhuman features, the Nakataka were often treated as lepers and disease-bearers. They were exiled from every village they ever entered. On many occasions, militias formed to try and take out the Nakataka, none of which were ever completely successful. Hundreds of years passed, yet the Nakataka persistently survived, hiding in mountain ranges and abandoned forests, living like beasts amongst the jungles of the wild. It wasn't until the first ninja clans formed that the Nakataka left their hidden homes. With the seemingly supernatural becoming widely accepted, the Nakataka gathered together and named themselves as a ninja clan. Though very few knew actual ninja techniques at the time, they picked up on the trade quickly. While only having a general proficiency in ninja techniques, their unique bloodline allowed them to defeat enemies in subtle ways, most commonly through hand-to-hand combat and prolonged exposure to their virus-cells.
For 50 years the Nakataka clan thrived, when suddenly a genious amongst their ranks was born. Named Rin, the genious young man formed numerous jutsu which utilized their corroding cells in destructive techniques. Soon taking lead of the clan, Rin attacked several rival clans using his new styles of jutsu, decimating all he opposed. Rin's youth and inexperience betrayed him however, for the other clans in the area became afraid of the Nakataka's horrible ability, banding together and seeking to eliminate the clan altogether. Rin was the first one killed, followed by his entire guard and immediate finally in the dead of the night. As the multiple clans teamed against them, the Nakataka fled to the Rice country, where they chose to stay in hiding just as they had in the past. Knowing that too large of a Keito settlement always gathered too much attention, the families of the clan split up, each moving to a different country. The largest group of the clan remained in Lightning Country for many years, however, until the rise of Karasu.
Karasu, enthralled by the power possessed by the Nakataka, set to inhabit the body of one before learning that their special cells made it impossible. Upon performing a test on one of their clan, Karasu learned that their cells would eat away at his essence had it ever tried to possess a Nakataka, thus making them useless for his own purposes. Enraged that he could not have their power, he gathered a small troup and destroyed the Lightning-country part of the clan, keeping only a few younglings for possible experimentation. These younglings were transported to some of his varous jails, where they supposedly grew up not knowing of their clan. Drawbacks: This KKG must be activated before any use of it. This clan will die out from OVEREXTENDING THEIR BODY AND OVERUSE OF HIS KKG. This KKG only last 10 post. Kekkei Gekkei: Viricual Cell Chakra Cost: Description: - Spoiler:
The Nakataka Bloodline is a unique and mysterious one. Rien cells are canabalistic and virus-like, and when in contact with human flesh, merge with the host cells and devour them from the inside. This process is known as corroding. The process of corroding causes a target to lose strength and capability, though through mere physical touch alone, very little damage is done. It is when their cells are used in combination with ninjutsu, that the clan's true power is shown. By using ninjutsu to mass replicate their cells and manipulate them outside the body causing them to heal at a rapid rate. the user is able to attack and infect targets with his cells from a ranged distance and on a mass-scale. Virus-Cell infects are non-lethal, with most infections wearing off anywhere from a couple hours to a couple days, depending on the size of the infection. Death can only occur when there is a constant, prolonged exposure to the virus cell, or if the cells are being directed by ninjutsu to corrode vital parts. Even paralysis and other side effects brought on by what is known as 'Locust' infects go away when the infection dies. Special Effect: - Spoiler:
Name: Nun'eki Henki no Jutsu Type:Ninjutsu Rank: D Description: Form up a clod of acidic mucus and stips it towad his victom.This mucus may burn through objest such as metal weapons and wood . If f it hits an opponent the acid will slowly eat away the flesh.(can be cure by simple medical jutsu) must be cured within 5 post otherwise thepart spit on will go disabled.
Name: Shuuwi Kobushi Sensu no Jutsu Type: Taijutsu Rank: D Description: The user fights in a style similar to the nirvana fist style, yet with less damage dealt through grand physical strength. Instead, the user uses the style's great speed as well as his own corrupting touch to cause minor muscle deterioration to the enemy. With each strike causing the opponent to grow sore, repeated strikes in previously stricken areas can cause the opponent's strength to wither bit by bit. Each successful strike lessens the opponent's strength by 5%.
Name: Mure no Jutsu Type:Ninjutsu Rank: C Description: The user forms two hand seals and greatly accelerates the cell division of his Locust cells, forming a black cloud around him. He then directs the cloud through projected mental commands, sending the cloud after the opponent and ordering his cells to merge with the target body. A large amount of virus cells merge with the body at this point, causing a significant amount of corrosion damage. If a target gets hit 3 times with this, they become unable to heal for the duration of the battle due to molecular corrosion.
Name: Shouten Mure no Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Rank: A Description: The user creates a smaller, denser cloud of Locust cells which he then directs for a single part of the opponent's body (usually a limb). The Locust cells merge with the targeted body part, causing severe damage. Such heavy inner-corrosion occurs that the the nervous system in that part of the limb gets fryed, causing the limb to become unusable. Heavy muscle damage is often dealt as well. The inner corrosion goes away after 5 posts unless the user's body is still under assault by more Locust Cells.
Name: Ekirei no Jutsu Type:Ninjutsu Rank: S Description: The user forms 6 hand signs and mass replicates his virus cells, causing an enormous black cloud of locust cells to spring from his body. He is able to freely control and direct these cells, attacking all enemies in the area. Because the cells are miscroscopic, it is very difficult to avoid these, for even if bodily protection is worn, they can be inhaled. Due to the instability of such a mass duplication, the cells only survive for a few minutes ( Two posts) yet because of such a large scale attack, most people find their bodies so badly dcorroded that they are inable to continue battle. If subjected to too much of the cells, a person's vital organs may corrode, causing death.
Name: Soiki Souhou no Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu Rank:C Description: The user executes a powerful strike that releases a great number of Locust Cells into the enemy's muscular system, corroding their muscles and causing their strength to decrease by 50% and their speed and agility to decrease by 25%. Does not Stack with other plague touches, does stack with corrupting fist.
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Last edited by Aries on Sat Jul 04, 2009 11:52 am; edited 6 times in total | |
| | | Salva Hiriashi Admin
Number of posts : 270 Age : 30 Location : ~In your deepest dreams~ Registration date : 2009-02-18
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| Subject: Re: Nakataka clan Sun Jun 21, 2009 12:55 am | |
| Your KKG is a no unless you make it have some weakness. 1st: You are not immune to poison.
2nd: There needs to be an activation to these cells, not an all the time jutsu. Maybe the KKG can be active for five posts, and then a two or three post cool down before the next use.
3rd: The first jutsu is not E ranked, make it D.
4th: for the second jutsu, if it lessons it by 20%, then you could render an opponent useless in five hits, thats hardly D rank. Make It B.
5th:With the third one, make it if they are hit strait on three times...
6th: with the Ekirei no Jutsu, make it two posts... But if in your post your character does things that would take time, post length goes down...
7th: You are aware that these jutsu cannot all be had by you at your genin rank, and they still count in your jutsu limit... | |
| | | Aries
Number of posts : 10 Registration date : 2009-06-20
| Subject: Re: Nakataka clan Sun Jun 21, 2009 1:24 am | |
| ok finished
but why a weakness this KKG can't really have a weakness
Kimimoro didn't have a weakness
the Uchiha don't have weakness
Rinneagan doesn't have weakness at all(way OP...lol)
none of the clans with kkg in naruto really have a weakness | |
| | | Minoichi Kazura
Number of posts : 36 Registration date : 2009-02-21
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| Subject: Re: Nakataka clan Sun Jun 21, 2009 1:37 am | |
| WRONG MAJOR WRONG ABSOLUTELY WRONG
Kimimaro and ALL the Kaguya die a LOT quicker. Kimimaro was only 48 when he died from OVEREXTENDING HIS BODY AND OVERUSE OF HIS KKG.
Rinnegan, yes they were OP, but they're weakness was that it would leave those who overused it.
And Sharingan caused Blindness NOW FIX YOUR KKG | |
| | | Aries
Number of posts : 10 Registration date : 2009-06-20
| Subject: Re: Nakataka clan Sun Jun 21, 2009 2:00 am | |
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| | | Salva Hiriashi Admin
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| Subject: Re: Nakataka clan Sun Jun 21, 2009 8:12 am | |
| lol mino... be more gentle XD But its true, Kimimaru died early... The rinningan can be countered by blocking the vision of the others, and making it just like a normal set of eyes. And we have yet to see just how much strain it puts on his body... And sharingan, well yes, blindness. | |
| | | Salva Hiriashi Admin
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| Subject: Re: Nakataka clan Sun Jun 21, 2009 8:21 am | |
| Mure no Jutsu needs to become C, because its the same thing as the touching chakra drain.
Soiki Souhou no Jutsu has to have an effect on the user as well, loosing that many cells from the body would not only out great strain on it, but as a more immidiate effect, make it weaker.
For all the jutsu which have to do with allowing your cells to travel from your body, they would not last long mingled with the thousands of cell of the air, and cells already live for a short period, so those jutsu need to die off fast, and can be stopped with another jutsu such a fire ball, or something which would kill the cells. | |
| | | Aries
Number of posts : 10 Registration date : 2009-06-20
| Subject: Re: Nakataka clan Sun Aug 02, 2009 2:17 am | |
| done
sorry ii was inactive BTW | |
| | | Salva Hiriashi Admin
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| Subject: Re: Nakataka clan Sun Aug 02, 2009 11:59 am | |
| Glad to have you back... And, here is the thing... I am accepting your KKG, but if i see it being OP in any way, I am going to bring it back here, and make you edit it ok? So just dont be OP... | |
| | | Aries
Number of posts : 10 Registration date : 2009-06-20
| Subject: Re: Nakataka clan Mon Aug 03, 2009 2:23 pm | |
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| | | xelloss
Number of posts : 27 Age : 29 Registration date : 2009-07-11
| Subject: Re: Nakataka clan Mon Aug 03, 2009 3:59 pm | |
| Hold the Phone!
If this clan's cells are virus like and toxic to others, how on earth do they reproduce? Sex would introduce them straight into their partner's body!
Sorry about that, but the Fridge logic there needed to be answered... | |
| | | Aries
Number of posts : 10 Registration date : 2009-06-20
| Subject: Re: Nakataka clan Mon Aug 03, 2009 7:51 pm | |
| I know it sounds nasty but we keep it in the family.....lol
and thier are very few of us | |
| | | xelloss
Number of posts : 27 Age : 29 Registration date : 2009-07-11
| Subject: Re: Nakataka clan Mon Aug 03, 2009 8:15 pm | |
| So they can't reproduce with someone who isn't part of the clan?
Hmm...
That sounds less like a clan and more like an entirely new species!
Fennikkusu FTW! (Fennikkusu are the species I came up with for this site, so yeah...)
Wait! More fridge logic!
Viruses aren't actually classified as living things! They have no DNA, and are actually sort of hostile strands of protein. So if your going like that, this clan would be more bacteria-like, or parasitic fungus-like than virus-like.
Damn it Xelloss, stop bringing up fridge logic! Just ignore it! | |
| | | Salva Hiriashi Admin
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| Subject: Re: Nakataka clan Fri Aug 07, 2009 2:02 pm | |
| xelloss... i forget if i did, but until i make you mod, You have no authority to post on character apps... | |
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